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A riddle(still under 'construction')

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Once Upon a Time

Five children were born.
Together they rule the world.
Never could they be torn
apart, forever will they hold.

The First, she is green
when still alive and breathing.
Feeds the Second, so keen,
then falls into Thirds embracing.

The Fourth is hard and
softens in Seconds presence.
The Fifth just likes to bend
with Third and Fourth for First to sense.

They need each other.
Missing even only one
would be a great bother.
It's just all together or none.

Now all of them are
still young yet old and ancient.
After reading this far,
do you know those five I mentioned?

27.11.12
as the title already says : it's not the final version yet, cause I'm still not satisfied with the result. but for now that's how it is...

lately I've been obsessed with riddles, espacially rhyming riddles :squee:
and I found a lot of defferent riddles about fire and water, a few about the wind or trees a riddle about the 4 elements
which made me wonder whether there are any about the element earth/soil.
I could find none.
then I wondered whether there were any riddles about the five elements and I found none.
so I decided to make one(ore more) about the five elements myself and that's how this one came to live ^^

solution:
1st is wood
2nd is fire
3rd is earth
4th is metal
5th is water

still working for a better one
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